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The Future is All We've Got by ~humorous-asterisk:iconhumorous-asterisk:



"What does it say to you?" she asked.

I adjusted my eyes and looked at the old film reel. I spoke after a second. "Fear."

"Of the past?"

I gravely nodded.

"What is there to fear in the past?"

She's right. The only thing to fear is the future.
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Exactly 50 words long. A vignette.

Written for :iconamberlouie:'s workshop, "Netting the Vignette", from :iconwriters-workshop:. The contest can be found here.

Vignettes are interesting. Difficult to work with. I was supposed to keep it around 50 words. I think I did okay, but it's hard to make your point in just 50 words. It's got to be like poetry -- simple, symbolic and no fluff. Keep it to the point.

I encourage everybody to try this! It was very interesting to do.

**Update 4/16/09: I re-made this into a longer piece of prose, but I wanted to preserve the original. I had fun making the 50-word version. The longer version can be found here.

If you would like to use my work, feel free -- just link back to my profile page, and drop me a quick note to let me know. ;)

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:iconshep4life:
it worked pretty good

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"There is beauty in despair. You just have to know where to look." Me! ;)
:icontacoplz:
idek what it is about this, but i really like it a lot asdlgh :thumbsup: YA :,D

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:iconhumorous-asterisk:
Thaaaaank yoooooooooou :D :hug:

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:iconhumorous-asterisk:
Thanks :D

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:frog:
:iconshep4life:
I've never tried one of those excersises...

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"There is beauty in despair. You just have to know where to look." Me! ;)
:iconhumorous-asterisk:
It's fun! You should! :D

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[link] ScribeSanctuary
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:frog:
:iconshep4life:
perhaps in the future

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"There is beauty in despair. You just have to know where to look." Me! ;)

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